Work on framing.
The artwork is nice but the whole thing has one simple pace.
The only thing that took away one star was that there wasn't much originality or plot. Other than that the particles smoothness and fluidity of the animation was fantastic.
I like your style.
Overall the animation and synchronization was above average and the voice acting was at the expected joshua standards being humorous but pretty generic. I only found the jokes funny because of josh's lovable voice. basic and dull jokes lose you a point there But the rest of the animation was fine.
Well thanks for the honesty! Josh really did well with the script, a lot better than I coulda done.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.